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Songwrongs (or, ‘Education’s End’)

Let me tell you where edu­ca­tion gets you. This morn­ing I set off from home in my car; it was ten to six, and I was just after a lit­tle some­thing easy on the ears. Scrolling through my tracks, I landed on an album I haven’t lis­tened to for many years: ‘Mad Not Mad’ by Mad­ness. It’s not, if I recall, a great album. Bit of a dying ember. Good cover (an early Anton Cor­bijn effort, no less), aim­less music. But all that’s not a rea­son to shun an album; the inter­ven­ing years may have been kind to it, or my opin­ions may have softened.

I put it on.

Open­ing track ‘Burn­ing the Boats’ kicked in. It sounded dis­tantly famil­iar – mem­o­ries waft­ing through from Christ­mas 1986, when I first put the nee­dle on my new vinyl copy – with a blan­d­ish chord pro­gres­sion struck through with a set of wacky saxophone/synthesizer jabs.

Then Suggs’s first lyric came in.

The gov­ern­ment… have announced…”

And that’s it. Song­wrong. Three words in.

A song­wrong is a phe­nom­e­non that occurs in a song that ini­tially sounds good, so your mind is open to the pos­si­bil­ity of lik­ing it, but which then wrongs it, snuff­ing the pos­si­bil­ity out, leav­ing only the charred and smok­ing remains of your enthusiasm.

The lyric should be, I need hardly tell you, “The gov­ern­ment has announced”. HasHAS announced.

Let the record show that, in def­er­ence to my 11-year old self, I con­tin­ued to lis­ten to the album. It’s still not great, but it does have its moments: ‘Tears You Can’t Hide’ is quite lovely, ‘Yesterday’s Men’ is a fit­ting swan­song of sorts, ‘Uncle Sam’ is maybe Madness-by-numbers, but if it’s Mad­ness play­ing it, then, well, who’s com­plain­ing? Not me. Not even me.

But it got me on to the con­cept of songwrongs.

The song­wrong that works hard­est for its money, com­ing in as the last sig­nif­i­cant sound, thereby under­min­ing the entire song that pre­cedes it occurs at the end of ‘Big Yel­low Taxi’ by Joni Mitchell. Ms Mitchell’s final vocal gym­nas­tics are fol­lowed by the most uncon­vinc­ing fake laugh ever to be com­mit­ted to acetate. A thor­ough­bred clas­sic, taken round the back of the sta­bles and shot by a moment of cod-spontaneous stu­dio indulgence.

Mad­ness would be hard to beat for the quick­est song­wrong – three words in is pretty snappy. The only ear­lier one I can think of doesn’t really count, because it doesn’t snuff the song totally, but merely imper­ils the flame before the song takes hold. It is, of course, Morrissey’s much sniggered-over ‘Punc­tured bicy­cle’ open­ing gam­bit in The Smiths’ break­through ‘This Charm­ing Man’. You could say this was, as far as the wider pub­lic is con­cerned, effec­tively two words into a career, which makes it more res­o­nant. “Have you heard his mis­pro­nun­ci­a­tion of ‘pla­gia­rise’ in ‘Ceme­try Gates’, not to men­tion the moronic mis-spelling of ‘cemetery’… Ill-educated buffoon!”

How­ever, as I nego­ti­ated the traf­fic on the M6, fil­let­ing The Smiths’ entire back-catalogue for song­wrongs, it was Mor­ris­sey who had the last laugh. After all, I can­not name another lyri­cist who might con­tem­plate start­ing a song – start­ing an album – with the word ‘bel­liger­ent’, as in “Bel­liger­ent ghouls run Man­ches­ter schools, spine­less swines, cemented minds”.

This, then, is education’s end. Bel­liger­ent ghouls, spine­less swine (to use the cor­rect plural of swine), cemented minds, wrong­ing some of the century’s finest work for a ha’peth of gram­mat­i­cal cloth. This is the kind of rule-straightening that kills artis­tic spon­tane­ity. [Please note, I used this machine’s spell-checker to spell ‘spon­tane­ity’ right – and again just then.]

I drew into the car park at work to the sound of Mor­ris­sey boun­cily singing “exetera, exetera”. I got out of my car and approached the build­ing. I was pre­ceded by a woman who has sat at the desk oppo­site mine for six years. I actu­ally don’t know her name. She didn’t hold the door open for me.

Move along now. There’s noth­ing to read here.

j

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